Cartoon Fanfic

[Seven Force]

This is a link to a cartoon fanfic I wrote a long time ago. I've pretty much almost discontinued writing it cause I thought it sucked. I'd like to hear your review on it, cause it was the first time I tried to write a story. Don't hold back on the critisim. If I get enough good reviews, maybe i'll get around to writing more chapters(maybe).

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/301202/1/

[King Hadas]

I thought the plot and dialouge was generic, the concept was so stupid that it almost gave me a seizure, Eds lines where way to long, and if you were itching at a love story between Eddy and Nazz I'm going to hunt you down and kill you.

[Seven Force]

You mean the concept around the backstory? Yeah, i'll admit, I wasn't thinking when I came up with that. It's really stupid. And yeah, I was gonna make a love story, but it wouldn't go further than that. I've written myself into a corner, and I can't get out. I was thinking about cancelling it.