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Immortal Goat
Aug 23rd, 2004, 06:22 PM
I didn't know what forum to put this in, so I guess this is as good as any. If it is wrong, then Mods, feel free to move it.

Anyhoo, this is my first ever flash drawing of anything. Whaddaya think?
http://img52.exs.cx/img52/1045/Linkpractice.png

HickMan
Aug 23rd, 2004, 06:39 PM
waynus

Spectre X
Aug 24th, 2004, 07:00 AM
Eyebrows are not attached to someone's head like that.

The left ear is longer than the right.

The eyes are not right. They look off. Too close together, maybe.

A neck is not a solid block. It's curved.

The jaw extends far beyond his ear. That is wrong. It should stop before his ear. In fact, the earlobe is juuuust behind the jaw.

pjalne
Aug 24th, 2004, 07:30 AM
The eyes are not right. They look off. Too close together, maybe.

The problem is that they're the same size, so the one that's farthest away will look bigger because of the perspective.

FS
Aug 24th, 2004, 07:54 AM
It's probably better placed in Art Shit. Anyway, I take it you copied and mirrored the ears and eyes - however, this face appears to be a three quarters view, not a frontal shot. The left ear and eye (right, for the viewer) should be horizontally resized to about 66% to make it look more natural.

Anonymous
Aug 24th, 2004, 07:57 AM
mouth is a little wide and mis-placed, too.

Zomboid
Aug 24th, 2004, 09:07 AM
Also, you have very poor hygiene.

Supafly345
Aug 24th, 2004, 01:13 PM
Stick to pixels

Anonymous
Aug 24th, 2004, 01:27 PM
Moved this to Art Shit so more actual artists will see it.

FS
Aug 24th, 2004, 01:38 PM
I never knew you had mod powers.

Can you give me a tail?

Anonymous
Aug 24th, 2004, 03:28 PM
^_^

freezedriedfetus
Aug 25th, 2004, 10:38 PM
well it looks like shit. but hey I can't do any better. in fact I can't do half as good. so good job!

</insult to clearly superior than mine art talent>

Jixby Phillips
Aug 25th, 2004, 11:25 PM
it looks just plain goofy :lol

EisigerBiskuit
Aug 26th, 2004, 12:28 AM
this thread is being tossed around like salad.

for a Flash creation, it isn't half of half bad

Immortal Goat
Aug 26th, 2004, 05:55 PM
I tried a different character this time. I think the results are better, but I know there are some problems. Critique away.

http://img49.exs.cx/img49/3006/gizmo.png

MLE
Aug 26th, 2004, 05:56 PM
i think the problem is that you're using flash and not something that's actually designed for making art.

Immortal Goat
Aug 26th, 2004, 05:59 PM
well, i plan on making movies with them, I am just testing to see if my movie art will be acceptable.

MLE
Aug 26th, 2004, 06:00 PM
you make your art in a different progam, then use flash to animate it.

don't ask me: i don't flash. i just know it's not an illustrating program.

Anonymous
Aug 26th, 2004, 06:08 PM
This thread reminds me of a site I saw a while back, wherein some kid was drawing wrestlers in MSPaint.
http://www.popnko.com/imock/booker.gif

Immortal Goat
Aug 26th, 2004, 06:11 PM
My pictures aren't THAT bad.

MLE
Aug 26th, 2004, 06:12 PM
i beg to differ

Anonymous
Aug 26th, 2004, 06:13 PM
http://www.popnko.com/imock/stonecold.gif

Immortal Goat
Aug 26th, 2004, 06:14 PM
Jeez, you're harsh people. How about a little CONSTRUCTIVE criticism?

MLE
Aug 26th, 2004, 06:15 PM
i already gave you some. don't use flash.

EDIT: use illustrator.

AChimp
Aug 26th, 2004, 06:15 PM
AHAHAHA!!! That's the best worst drawing of Stone Cold ever! :lol

Anonymous
Aug 26th, 2004, 06:17 PM
http://www.popnko.com/imock/hulkster.gif

FS
Aug 26th, 2004, 07:23 PM
In celebration of this thread I present this brief collaboration with Chojin:

http://www.fragile-minds.com/~fs/wrestle.html

WATCH IT, YOU

Oh yeah, it's better to watch it from your hard drive cause it's more up to speed that way. Right click and save target!
http://www.fragile-minds.com/~fs/wrestle.swf

If you don't have Macromedia Flash (the program, not the player) installed the dimensions'll be fucked up so download the page too, in that case.
http://www.fragile-minds.com/~fs/wrestle.html
And watch it from the page.

MLE
Aug 26th, 2004, 07:29 PM
see, that's what you use flash for.

Anonymous
Aug 26th, 2004, 07:34 PM
I have been laughing at that for about 10 minutes now :tear

MLE
Aug 26th, 2004, 07:36 PM
it's true.

FS
Aug 26th, 2004, 07:36 PM
Vote 5 before the fags blam it

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/189179

Sam
Aug 26th, 2004, 07:44 PM
I like how you made Booker T dance. :)

MLE
Aug 26th, 2004, 07:47 PM
CHECK YOUR PAYPAL ACCOUNT, FS

Anonymous
Aug 26th, 2004, 08:07 PM
Blammed. :tear

Maybe if we can get Roger to get Tom Fulp to post it.

Jixby Phillips
Aug 26th, 2004, 08:28 PM
I am very much in Chojins boat ps i think that maybe there should be an arcade-style fighting stage game and that will be the intro screen and it'd go for maybe 2 minutes and that song would play durring the entire game???

Supafly345
Aug 26th, 2004, 09:10 PM
It isn't suprising why it got blammed, when it is a funny cartoon disguised as a "i hope i get lucky and this ends up being funny" cartoon. Do an indepth anaylsis of the site the pictures came from including commentary from the wrestler drawings. Though it would be far too much work, and probably not worth it, that would be what is needed to let the viewer know that this is actually funny.

Helm
Aug 26th, 2004, 11:31 PM
what are you talking about supafly that was awesome.

Jixby Phillips
Aug 26th, 2004, 11:33 PM
ps when i said i was in chojins boat i meant because i laughed at it a lot and i had sourdough bread in my mouth !

AChimp
Aug 26th, 2004, 11:43 PM
Everyone in the world should uninstall Flash after that. Nothing funnier will ever be made. :lol :tear

FS
Aug 27th, 2004, 07:17 AM
I wish responses to reviews didn't get deleted when a movie got blammed. I made some really psychotic death threats and accusations of homosexuality to most of them.

BUT I EARNED A DOLLAR WITH IT :O

Supafly345
Aug 27th, 2004, 08:53 AM
what are you talking about supafly that was awesome.I watched it for an hour straight it was so awesome, I was giving tips on how to trick NG viewers into liking it.

HickMan
Aug 27th, 2004, 02:58 PM
I sent it to a friend who is a die-hard wrestling fan and said it was UnAmerican :(. I lol'd

ThisIsWitty
Aug 27th, 2004, 08:18 PM
Booker T's distant look and flailing limbs portray his wrestling character very accurately.

MLE
Aug 27th, 2004, 10:20 PM
shut the fuck up.

liquidstatik
Aug 27th, 2004, 10:31 PM
Ouch :O

Sethomas
Aug 28th, 2004, 08:02 AM
I want a flash drawing of me. :(

freezedriedfetus
Aug 28th, 2004, 12:00 PM
hulk is still my hero :)

FS
Aug 28th, 2004, 12:48 PM
I want a flash drawing of me. :(

I'll do it if it can be the you with the huge awesome curly fro :(

Father §p@z
Sep 1st, 2004, 02:09 AM
I tried a different character this time. I think the results are better, but I know there are some problems. Critique away.

http://img49.exs.cx/img49/3006/gizmo.png
What the hell is that, a Furby? :lol

freezedriedfetus
Sep 1st, 2004, 11:21 AM
aint you ever seen gremlins? it's Gizmo! (I think)

Father §p@z
Sep 1st, 2004, 01:11 PM
I've seen gremlins but it still looks like a Furby :)

ArrowX
Sep 6th, 2004, 11:52 AM
I tried a different character this time. I think the results are better, but I know there are some problems. Critique away.

http://img49.exs.cx/img49/3006/gizmo.png
What the hell is that, a Furby? :lol
Its howie mandell.

But sadly youre now as pathetic as mubert. I'm sure just about EVERYONE in north america knows what Gizmo looks like

MLE
Sep 6th, 2004, 01:14 PM
even when it's a crappy one :rolleyes

Telltolin
Sep 9th, 2004, 06:45 AM
well, i plan on making movies with them, I am just testing to see if my movie art will be acceptable. how about stop whining like a little sissy boy.