SMART ASTRONAUTS

[Jixby Phillips]

I was bored two nights ago so I wrote another sketch out of an idea Mr. Adventure had :(

http://www.geocities.com/jixby_phillips/smart-astronauts.html

He said "there should be a movie about astronauts that find an alien spaceship and they DON'T go in and they WALK AWAY and its called 'SMART ASTRONAUTS'" so i wrote it!

[executioneer]

hahaha "never before has so much brains exploded" :lol

[Dole]

That was funny.

[huond]

DO U WANT MY HONEST OPINION???

[Jixby Phillips]

yeah ;_;

[huond]

it reminds me of mad tv SRY!!! :(:(

[Pub Lover]

I thought this & the Tupac thing were really funny. You & MrAdventure work great together. :)

[Jixby Phillips]

it reminds me of mad tv SRY!!! :(:(

Take off the laugh track in your head and it'll remind you of the Ben Stiller Show >:

or :( The Jenny MacArthy Show maybe :(

[huond]

it reminded me mad tv in the way they make sketches go on way longer than they ever should and tack stuff on (dumb plumbers (again, SRY!)). it was way smarter tahn anything that would get put on mad tv so w/e, ben stiller show is probably a way better comparison :(

[Jixby Phillips]

dumb plummers is my favorite part ;_;

I write stuff as if it were going to be filmed, performed and edited by people more talented than me. So almost everything I write is "too long"

[huond]

i would cut out everything about it being a movie promo (i think thats what really made me think mad tv) and then dumb plumbers would work better because ti is funny :(

im not talented tho so dont listen to me