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BrokenHeart
Jun 22nd, 2005, 05:14 AM
Forever
By: Me
What you always desire
Is what you dread.
What you dream of is reality.
Good is Evil.
And evil is good.
Light is dark and then you turn out all the lights,
Everything is bright.
A believer is a doubter
And a doubter is a believer.
A dying soul
Is a living soul
And a living soul is dying.
Happiness is crying
Happiness is dying.
Love is fading,
Heart by heart.
The only way to keep it from dying is to feel
To hold,
To have,
To live.
To love.
Until you are gone to another place,
Pass love on to the next soul on earth.
Forever.
Until time is no more,
Until Earth is no more.
Until human flesh...is no more.

Pain
By:Me
I'm all alone
Silenced
But loud,
Sitting in a fiery pit
I am burning in this fiery pit,
No air so I can't breathe,
No breath, so I can't scream,
My eyes are gone, so I can't see
I can feel,
I am burning,
Unable to move,
Unable to see
Unable to scream for help,
But no one is here to help me...
So it would be useless if I tried...
So I'll sit here and wait...
Wait until I've died.

I Love You.
By: Me
I love you.
More than the depth of all oceans combined,
More than all the stars in the sky.
Of all the rainbows that form,
After a thunder storm,
I love you more than all of that.
Because you are the only one,
The only one I feel this way about.
Without a doubt.
You're the one.
I always forgive you when you upset me,
And you always forgive me.
I trust you.
More than a firefighter on duty or a cop.
I feel safe in your arms.
Because I know you would never hurt me,
And I would never hurt you.
I love you.
You patched up the crack in my heart,
And now I pray,
That you never tear it back apart.

Begging for Love
By: Me
Help me.
I'm in pain here,
Why can't you see?
Yes I know how you feel,
But do you know the feelings of me?
I still love you, dear.
Can't get my mind off you, dear.
Why would you leave, dear?
Do you love me, dear?
I really do love you, dear.
What? You don't believe me, dear?
Why not, dear?
You think for you I feel fear?
No it isn't true honey, baby.
I know I was your lady!
Can't you stay?
Can't we go back to that?
Please sweetie,
I love you, sweetie!
Please don't leave me sweetie!
If you leave, my heart will defeat me.

Hold me.
By: Me
I think I'm cold.
Will you hold me?
I'll do whatever I'm told,
If you just hold me.
I love to be held,
I want do be held,
By you, I am held.
Held close and tight,
I love to feel
Your warm loving touch.
It makes me think of how
I love you so much.
And I know you love me,
It's becuase you admit it.
But still,
I love it when you hold me,
for a minute.
And I really hope you know,
That I love you so very much.
Because I don't admit it.
I'm sorry I don't,
I'm just so spacey,
Because I think about you holding me,
Hugging me,
Loving me,
And I hope you can feel my pure warm love,
When I'm in your arms,
I feel like I'm safe,
In the wing of a dove.
So hold me,
Hug me,
And love me,
And have me.
I want you to hold me and never let go.

So much Love
By:Me
Your love
Is love so pure,
I feel so great when you are near
Whenever it is your call I hear,
I smile, glad to know that you came for me.
Sweep me off my feet, dear
Take me to a good place, dear
Show me there is no reason for fear
So I won't have to cry, dear.
I love you, dear.
I hope you see
I love you, dear,
Do you love me?
I hope you do
For that I pray
I don't ever want you to go away!
Stay with me baby,
Be with me baby,
Don't leave me baby,
Because the love I have for you baby,
It's more than the world, baby
More than all the stars and rainbows, baby
More than everything, baby
That's how much i love you, baby.
So with this poem I ask you baby,
Will I always be your lady?

Behind a Closed Door
By: Me
The door just shut,
But my heart opened up.
I began saying things
I never before could speak of.
"I love you!" I said.
"Don't leave me!" I begged,
For him to leave me
Is what I dread.
I knocked on the door
Even though he was out and I was in.
I suddenly heard him yell,
"Okay you win!"
Then I heard a loud BANG!
I opened the door.
My eyes grew wide
As I saw him lying on the floor.
There was a gun
Next to his motionless hand
And teardrops fell from my eyes.
I called 911
I couldn't help but crying.
"He just shot himself,
And now he is dying"
I couldn't bear to think how my life was about to end up.
All because of my love,
I messed it all up.

Always Love
By: Emily Kunde
Unsafe and unprotected,
Unwanted and unloved.
That was how she felt,
When she felt a grudge.
She felt a grudge against her family,
And a grudge against her friends.
They never stood by her,
They never met ends.
Her friends never understood,
Why she was always so sad,
They had no idea,
Her heart was broken bad.
No idea why,
Or how or when or who,
But then they finally cared,
By then it was too late,
When they saw this horror,
They felt no clean slate.
They saw her lying
upon her bedroom floor,
Her face was down,
And a gun was next to her hand.
There was blood all around
And it stained her nice white gown.
So the moral of this poem,
Is to never betray the ones you care for,
Always stand beside them,
And don't drive them to a bloody floor.

Dole
Jun 22nd, 2005, 05:28 AM
ludicrous teenage guff forum

ShaunHorsePony
Jun 22nd, 2005, 06:30 AM
That poetry wasn't funny at all. :(

AChimp
Jun 22nd, 2005, 09:46 AM
Banned forum. :)

Crimson Ghost
Jun 22nd, 2005, 11:31 AM
Why write poems when you can take drugs.

nothing4buddha
Jun 22nd, 2005, 02:56 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v214/DRUMMING4BUDDHA/gothfag.jpg

Big McLargehuge
Jun 22nd, 2005, 04:18 PM
i am so moved

mburbank
Jun 22nd, 2005, 04:24 PM
who let the dogs out?



who?




who?



Who?

Who?

kellychaos
Jun 22nd, 2005, 05:02 PM
Christ on two bikes!! >:

eggyolk
Jun 22nd, 2005, 05:16 PM
sweet jesus of nazerus no :(

rockets redglare
Jun 22nd, 2005, 07:40 PM
jesus is a fag, and other sacreligious comments

hammered_soul
Jun 27th, 2005, 03:39 PM
Well, even though some people have said this thread is in the wrong forum, I may as well make an attempt to submit some decent poetry. No, it's not about teenage love or suicide either, so don't fret

Slit
Inhale
The walls around you warp
Exhale
The toxin swirls around in your veins
Inhale
You sway upon your feet
Exhale
The smoke clouds your vision
Inhale
Reality breaks apart
Exhale
Thoughts flash through your mind
"Have I done the right thing in escaping this reality?"
Inhale
"Was your original existence not dull?"
Exhale
"Indeed it was, but will I ever return?"
Inahle
"No"
Exhale
Your inhibitions shatter
Inhale
The twisted vision in front of you blazes by
Exhale
No more breath

kahljorn
Jun 27th, 2005, 04:18 PM
I hope you wrote that to look like a stupid asshole... if you did... applause is in order.

kellychaos
Jun 27th, 2005, 05:01 PM
How could he be typing and dying at the same time?

hammered_soul
Jun 27th, 2005, 08:18 PM
I hope you wrote that to look like a stupid asshole... if you did... applause is in order.
I'm guessing that was directed towards me.

Gurlugon
Jun 27th, 2005, 08:22 PM
huys

you look a lot like that "quiet" kid who sat in front of me in computer keybaording. you breathed quite heavily, and we know you like kenshin, so stop telling *us*!!!

p.s. - for serious

hammered_soul
Jun 27th, 2005, 10:04 PM
No, I'm sorry, I'm not particularly fond of anime

Lotida
Jun 27th, 2005, 10:18 PM
I hope you wrote that to look like a stupid asshole... if you did... applause is in order.

Don't worry dear your title is safe.

sadie
Jun 27th, 2005, 11:51 PM
well, lah-tee-dah!

kellychaos
Jun 28th, 2005, 04:25 PM
obla-dee, obla-da!!

Chugs
Jun 28th, 2005, 04:43 PM
What an emo thread >:

kellychaos
Jun 28th, 2005, 04:44 PM
Please stop breathing.

Skulhedface
Jun 28th, 2005, 07:59 PM
"I made poems!"

I make bowel movements myself. I don't post them however. I suggest you take that advice.