Kilgore Jones takes on the World

[Spectre X]

It's a comic I've started for a school project. It will be a touching story about love, hatred and having the villain beaten up.

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[Vampywampy]

What a lovely style you have. :]

[MLE]

Your style has gotten tons better. Once you get the hang of inking and someone colors for you, you're in great shape!

[sloth]

Looking good, you've definitely improved leaps and bounds.

[Guitar Woman]

Does this mean you're never gonna finish that comic about you and those other guys going to see the giant squid?

[MLE]

I thought that was a 24 hour comic.

[Guitar Woman]

Yeah, but I think it deserved an ending. :(

[MLE]

THAT'S NOT HOW IT WORKS

[Guitar Woman]

sorry but i can't draw for shit so i don't know anything about making comics :(

[MLE]

stop trying to fit in (which will probably make you funny again) and i'll forgive you.

plus bring back some old avatars.

[Guitar Woman]

When was ever I funny? :(

[MLE]

before you tried to fit in, you were somewhat funny. (back when chojin called you refreshing or something of the sort)

anyways, to keep this all on topic, i think you've gotten the hang of faces, and you should try perfecting your female figure and start learning to ink yourself

[Guitar Woman]

Yes, the comic.

It looks like it's gonna be great, I like your style a lot, and it's nice to see how much you've improved since the first comic you put up here. At least, the first one I saw.

[MLE]

Oh, and another thing that might help you out with the female face is to make the nose smaller/thinner. you'd be surprised how much that little change can really make a face better.

[Spectre X]

Thanks you guys, I'll keep that in mind. :)

[MLE]

you're welcome! you should play on isketch with me sometime

[Spectre X]

I wish I could draw things properly with my mouse. :(

Oh, and page two is up. :)

[MLE]

i do like page two. get a wacom and play isketch with me

[Spectre X]

Page three is done, and I didn't have a ruler with me when I made it, so the panels are all wonky. :(

[GADZOOKS]

I think it looks swell! My only problem with it is that I don't like comic book covers where all the characters are just standing around in a group, but that's a personal problem not an artistic one. :(

[the_dudefather]

great stuff

[Spectre X]

Thank you. Page four is up now, too.

[Guitar Woman]

hahaha, the look on his face when he sees the rat :lol

[MLE]

start inking and coloring ;o

[Supafly345]

Once you get down a proper style, its time to improve setting, character development, poses and features. You know, the harder stuff.

[Spectre X]

Right, just starting with that. Page five, by the way.

[Chojin]

this is seriously a great comic :< if i get really bored i'll ink a page or two in illustrator.

[Spectre X]

Aw, thanks guys. :)

Page six.

[xbxDaniel]

Is it cool with you if I save them to my computer? I don't want to just take them without asking.

[Spectre X]

Yes, you can do that, but don't post them anywhere else. I can tell.

[xbxDaniel]

Thanks! I want to make Ted Thunders head into an avatar for my account here, but once again I wanted to ask you before doing anything. I'm really liking it by the way, thanks for sharing it with us and all.

[Emu]

The style brings to mind some combination of Freakazoid, Venture Brothers and Megas XLR. I love it. :D

[Spectre X]

Thank you! :D

Also: Page seven!

[Spectre X]

More pages, hooray!

[Spectre X]

And another page.

This is now officially the longest comic I've ever done.

[Chojin]

you should make this a weekly webcomic sort of thing :o

after you figure out how to ink, i mean

[Spectre X]

Page eleven, hooray!

[Pub Lover]

I'm gonna be Henry Jones when I grow up. :(

[Rez]

i dont think i've said how good this comic is yet.
i like it a LOT.

"she's an archaeologist, she's just at a dig in the balkans..."
"digging for boners."

the whole thing is very funny, but that line was so perfect.

[James]

I like where this is going. Places.

Why are the best comics the ones that aren't actually published? :(

[sadie]

spectre, you are very talented!

[Ninjavenom]

I know this is late and all, but when did you get so good? I love it.

[Spectre X]

Thank you! :)

Page twelve!

[Spectre X]

Page thirteen!

[ItalianStereotype]

this really is the best thing you've ever done on i-mockery!

[Misdemonar]

Stop being a jerk italy >:

[Grislygus]

Once you get down a proper style, its time to improve setting, character development, poses and features. You know, the harder stuff.

Really? The poses, facial expressions, and body language seemed down-pat to me. I definitely agree with the character development part, though I don't think it should be hard. Now that the characters' personalities and backgrounds have been established, I'm a proponent of letting them bounce off one another, both for fleshing them out and for comedic effect.

[ItalianStereotype]

what the hell are you talking about, misdemonar

[ItalianStereotype]

UPDATE PRZ

[Spectre X]

Yes, yes, don't worry, updates will come.

[McClain]

I enjoyed that very much. You got skills, man! Although your penmanship is lacking, you more than make up for it. It's almost endearing.

[sloth]

maybe a bit late to jump on the praise bandwagon but this really is the dog's go-betweens. my school art projects always involved dried pasta and papier mache, and were invariably shit. good work!

[Spectre X]

Page fourteen, finally!

[Pub Lover]

Wow, whatever you've been doing between updates has been very worthwhile.

[James]

asdfasdf

[Dire Flamingo]

I'm shit when it comes to drawing, and this is quite good. Please throw some updates at us.

And is Leon the harbinger of the apocalypse or does he just have a pretty crown?

[FartinMowler]

I kept saying he was good :) great stuff so far...