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Ninjavenom
Oct 13th, 2003, 12:24 AM
I've just been writing phrases down recently, in what i guess you'd call "poetry", only what i write never means anything. I just write down the phrases that pop into my head. It's kinda weird, and some of them are senseless, with impossible adjectives o .o They're all separated by an empty line, the same as how i wrote them.

Just as bastards craft their jewelry
Shrieking vomit like a fountain
Conditionless Power Overwhelming
It's like pools of fucking stardust
Cursed apocalypse of napalm
May i browse your shelves tonight?
Perhaps but a twitter
For fear of grinding darkness

With shredded omnipotence
Influence... waning
It's pointless to continue
Thank god for apples

Bone grinding agony of flesh
Back down, mighty Golem!
Feast no more tonight
Lest ye crave sculptured vanity.

Sloth

I'd like to claim i'm not a bucket psychopath
But who knows?
It's like spawning children
Only ferociously powerful

...And when you touch the lips of God...
Do you bleed?

It's kind of like slitting the throat of a gutterslut
Engaging carnal cruelty
Maximize the crustcore

Karate Whore
Defilition of the autophage
Empiric tyranny grasping wildly
Hope only clings for so long
The key grip of the new millenium
Quite like the banter of Harpies
Where lymphatic suffocation occurs
Once consent has passed
Eliteness forcing dept control on one's ego
Sliced through like a knife fucking butter
Putrescent perversions pervading the pacifists
Of a sheltered ego

Salmonella
Fish




See? Poetry sucks unless you're the one who wrote it. :(

Professor Cool
Oct 13th, 2003, 01:53 AM
That shit is ten times then then the lyrics to any thing i wrote.

I like "I'd like to claim i'm not a bucket psychopath" the best

FS
Oct 13th, 2003, 06:22 AM
I often collect weird little sentences and nonsensical rhymes that I come up with, and they tend to pop up in my sig. Sometimes I just want to save them for use later on in a story or something.

sspadowsky
Oct 13th, 2003, 12:59 PM
Sounds like someone's been listening to old Carcass. :) Good man.

I like "Thank God for apples" the best.

Protoclown
Oct 13th, 2003, 01:18 PM
I do the same thing, Ninjavenom. I write down a lot of phrases, or band names that pop into my head, and I keep them all in a notebook. Some of them make it into my poetry (I've not written any poetry in over a year though) and others will be used in a couple stories I have planned. If nothing else, they sound cool and they're good for sparking creative ideas.

I like "It's like pools of fucking stardust".

Ninjavenom
Oct 13th, 2003, 03:07 PM
Good to see i'm not crazy. :O

I like writing that stuff down, it's something creative i can do that i don't really have to stress over, it's just something that kinda happens. Some stuff i wouldn't mind using as quotes, either. The lips of god one is already in my gay AIM thingy. Yay for faux-symbolism. o .o

Rongi
Oct 13th, 2003, 04:02 PM
I made up this band name once called Rock Monkey Jesus. I even wrote a story about how they invented Reggae Metal :(