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Kat
Aug 13th, 2009, 05:06 PM
Yes.

Tadao
Aug 13th, 2009, 05:10 PM
WARNING! MAY CONTAIN FURRIES!

Kat
Aug 13th, 2009, 05:14 PM
Not may, my friend.

But WILL.

The universe there is full of 'em.

Tadao
Aug 13th, 2009, 05:16 PM
I'm not your friend buddy

Kat
Aug 13th, 2009, 05:19 PM
Nor I yours.

Tadao
Aug 13th, 2009, 05:25 PM
http://thefelines.smackjeeves.com/

The Leader
Aug 13th, 2009, 07:08 PM
When's there going to be sex in this thing? You're already at page two and I don't see any butt yiffing.

Kat
Aug 13th, 2009, 10:47 PM
Sorry to dissapoint...

...But there is no sex. Not so much as the minorist of minor nudity. So you might as well get your mind out of the gutter now.

Shyandquietguy
Aug 14th, 2009, 12:28 AM
She slipped on a pile of jizz!

elx
Aug 14th, 2009, 12:49 AM
dunno if you were looking for critique but i noticed a lot of issues with the grammar and the spelling mistakes were especially obvious - from a quick glance at page 2 i noticed 'immortal', 'imagine' and 'fulfillment' were each missing a letter.

so yeah, not sure if those were intentional or what but they were pretty big distractions for me. other than that it looks great!

Dimnos
Aug 14th, 2009, 10:04 AM
What no sex?! You cant have a furry comic on the interweb without sex. You sir/madame are fired!

Kat
Aug 14th, 2009, 12:42 PM
Yes, I tend to type faster than I should and then not check over it. I get a lot of typos that way.

But thank you.

Chojin
Aug 14th, 2009, 09:17 PM
i see no comic

did you delete it or something

had my fursuit on and everything

Tadao
Aug 14th, 2009, 09:23 PM
Yes.

http://thefelines.smackjeeves.com/

:domo

captain516
Aug 18th, 2009, 10:09 PM
The layout is terrible, I can't tell what order I'm supposed to read it in.