I'm not used to drawing in the computer :<
 

As someone who can't draw the female figure to save his life, I'd say that's more than adequate for working on an unfamiliar format. You did a fine job on highlighting, too.

new version

Damn that is almost creepily skinny. I love the colors though.

How do you shade? I tlooks like you used the blur tool a lot or something, and it kind of looks off because of that. Or rather, if you didn't use the blur tool, the shadows look a tad too undefined.

It works with the shoulders, but not the face so much.

i don't ever use the blur tool ;o i'm just angry that the one tool i really need, my compuer is too slow to handle and it just looks like circles >:

dont draw IN the computer, draw in FRONT of it!