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Immortal Goat Aug 23rd, 2004 06:22 PM

It's Link!
 
I didn't know what forum to put this in, so I guess this is as good as any. If it is wrong, then Mods, feel free to move it.

Anyhoo, this is my first ever flash drawing of anything. Whaddaya think?

HickMan Aug 23rd, 2004 06:39 PM

waynus

Spectre X Aug 24th, 2004 07:00 AM

Eyebrows are not attached to someone's head like that.

The left ear is longer than the right.

The eyes are not right. They look off. Too close together, maybe.

A neck is not a solid block. It's curved.

The jaw extends far beyond his ear. That is wrong. It should stop before his ear. In fact, the earlobe is juuuust behind the jaw.

pjalne Aug 24th, 2004 07:30 AM

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Originally Posted by Spectre X
The eyes are not right. They look off. Too close together, maybe.

The problem is that they're the same size, so the one that's farthest away will look bigger because of the perspective.

FS Aug 24th, 2004 07:54 AM

It's probably better placed in Art Shit. Anyway, I take it you copied and mirrored the ears and eyes - however, this face appears to be a three quarters view, not a frontal shot. The left ear and eye (right, for the viewer) should be horizontally resized to about 66% to make it look more natural.

Anonymous Aug 24th, 2004 07:57 AM

mouth is a little wide and mis-placed, too.

Zomboid Aug 24th, 2004 09:07 AM

Also, you have very poor hygiene.

Supafly345 Aug 24th, 2004 01:13 PM

Stick to pixels

Anonymous Aug 24th, 2004 01:27 PM

Moved this to Art Shit so more actual artists will see it.

FS Aug 24th, 2004 01:38 PM

I never knew you had mod powers.

Can you give me a tail?

Anonymous Aug 24th, 2004 03:28 PM

^_^

freezedriedfetus Aug 25th, 2004 10:38 PM

well it looks like shit. but hey I can't do any better. in fact I can't do half as good. so good job!

</insult to clearly superior than mine art talent>

Jixby Phillips Aug 25th, 2004 11:25 PM

it looks just plain goofy :lol

EisigerBiskuit Aug 26th, 2004 12:28 AM

this thread is being tossed around like salad.

for a Flash creation, it isn't half of half bad

Immortal Goat Aug 26th, 2004 05:55 PM

I tried a different character this time. I think the results are better, but I know there are some problems. Critique away.


MLE Aug 26th, 2004 05:56 PM

i think the problem is that you're using flash and not something that's actually designed for making art.

Immortal Goat Aug 26th, 2004 05:59 PM

well, i plan on making movies with them, I am just testing to see if my movie art will be acceptable.

MLE Aug 26th, 2004 06:00 PM

you make your art in a different progam, then use flash to animate it.

don't ask me: i don't flash. i just know it's not an illustrating program.

Anonymous Aug 26th, 2004 06:08 PM

This thread reminds me of a site I saw a while back, wherein some kid was drawing wrestlers in MSPaint.
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Immortal Goat Aug 26th, 2004 06:11 PM

My pictures aren't THAT bad.

MLE Aug 26th, 2004 06:12 PM

i beg to differ

Anonymous Aug 26th, 2004 06:13 PM

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Immortal Goat Aug 26th, 2004 06:14 PM

Jeez, you're harsh people. How about a little CONSTRUCTIVE criticism?

MLE Aug 26th, 2004 06:15 PM

i already gave you some. don't use flash.

EDIT: use illustrator.

AChimp Aug 26th, 2004 06:15 PM

AHAHAHA!!! That's the best worst drawing of Stone Cold ever! :lol


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