Kilgore Jones takes on the World
 

It's a comic I've started for a school project. It will be a touching story about love, hatred and having the villain beaten up.

What a lovely style you have. :]

Your style has gotten tons better. Once you get the hang of inking and someone colors for you, you're in great shape!

Looking good, you've definitely improved leaps and bounds.

Does this mean you're never gonna finish that comic about you and those other guys going to see the giant squid?

I thought that was a 24 hour comic.

Yeah, but I think it deserved an ending. :(

THAT'S NOT HOW IT WORKS

sorry but i can't draw for shit so i don't know anything about making comics :(

stop trying to fit in (which will probably make you funny again) and i'll forgive you.

plus bring back some old avatars.

When was ever I funny? :(

before you tried to fit in, you were somewhat funny. (back when chojin called you refreshing or something of the sort)

anyways, to keep this all on topic, i think you've gotten the hang of faces, and you should try perfecting your female figure and start learning to ink yourself

Yes, the comic.

It looks like it's gonna be great, I like your style a lot, and it's nice to see how much you've improved since the first comic you put up here. At least, the first one I saw.

Oh, and another thing that might help you out with the female face is to make the nose smaller/thinner. you'd be surprised how much that little change can really make a face better.

Thanks you guys, I'll keep that in mind. :)

you're welcome! you should play on isketch with me sometime

I wish I could draw things properly with my mouse. :(

Oh, and page two is up. :)

i do like page two. get a wacom and play isketch with me

Page three is done, and I didn't have a ruler with me when I made it, so the panels are all wonky. :(

I think it looks swell! My only problem with it is that I don't like comic book covers where all the characters are just standing around in a group, but that's a personal problem not an artistic one. :(

great stuff

Thank you. Page four is up now, too.

hahaha, the look on his face when he sees the rat :lol

start inking and coloring ;o

Once you get down a proper style, its time to improve setting, character development, poses and features. You know, the harder stuff.