Band lyrics
 

My friends and I wrote a song called " My Baby's Got Wanderings" I helped craft the song a little, and I came up with these lyrics. Any critiquing is encouraged. They're somewhat of a summation of my pursuit of knowledge and dabbling in substances. I incorporated alot of techniques used by Leonard Cohen, just to add another preface.

My baby’s got wanderings
Like a field commander into the storm
Foolish daytime, the mystic oblivion
And before I realize, I’m alive again

And I don’t know how many times
And I don’t ask why

My baby’s got wanderings
Cutting through dusk and into the deep
Infinite oblivion, imploring daytime
And before I realize, I’ve fallen asleep

And I don’t know how many times
And I don’t ask why

Lead to knowledge by the fool
A biblical verse, or the devil’s golden rule
Hope to distinguish the two
Lead to knowledge by the fool

THAT'S A #1 RECORD

EDIT: Changed this part


Lead to knowledge by the fool
A biblical verse, or the devil’s golden rule
I pray to distinguish the two
But my baby's making it so hard to do

That's a #6 record :(

Put the music on the intarweb and post a link to it. Hearing how it's sung will be helpful.

Yeah, we record with a karaoke machine. :(

But I'll see what I can do. We might hit up a studio sometime this summer.