Dreams and The Perceptor
 

Excellent use of red watercolor and fecal matter.

let your forms run off the page, and leave a little more negative space over your subject to mantain balance. also placing your subject off-center is good, but it needs to either be more subtle, or more dramatic.

you have a good subject but your placement and composition really bring this piece down.

this could be good, but you need to focus less on your media, and make your final work look a little more intentional. if the media was your intended focus, then put it to more of a dramatic use, because there is nothing subtle here.

all in all you have a direction, but it seems a little under developed and that really kills what you are doing here

thanks fo' the constructive etcetteras.
"this could be good, but you need to focus less on your media, and make your final work look a little more intentional."

The work was intentional. The media was an accident. It happened that the only red media available. was not watercolour.

Africa is no place for constructive criticism

My point, though regrettably harsh, is that your work has potential, but lacks a certain refined quality and ultimately only appears as amateur.

I point out what must be said for you to improve your self and I will not water it down or mix in sugar.

I Kow you do not wish to remain only a amateur

I aint an amature
that piece got shown in New York and west Hollywood.

It sold for $1,500

I know it isn't good. These american fools will worship anyone thats been on TV,
and buy their art for rediculous prices.

Andy Warhol thought a Soup can was art.
He was a nincompoop. But he died a rich nincompoop.

Although, the only thing I recognize as Good Art, on my part
is poems.

Warhol wasn't a nincompoop, he was a wierd fuck.

I agree I Fucking hate Warhol.

I think that ones Justification of art should not out weigh the work itself.

However I have never read a poem that I didnt think sucked.
all poems seem to write themselvs assuming that they will be good.

or mabey I just dont read enough

So its only not ameture by definition.

and $1500 aint shit real arts expensive.