[pjalne]

I agree with Helm, and I would also suggest a different approach when it comes to the hair and construction of the face. The way stuff is composed now, it kinda looks like you had a Playmo wig and had to fit a face around and into it. I'd recommend you try to find a way to have his hair define and bring out his face. I'm not really sure how to describe what I mean more clearly, but look at Mickey Mouse post-1950. He has very simple and appealing forms, and the black area of his head fits nicely around his facial features (I know I sound like a furry) and emphasize them. It's especially important that the eyes are well-defined and aren't obsctructed. I'd also recommend you put some work into the thigh-waist-transistion.

But good work. The perspective on the arm closest to the screen is very nice, and works very well with the simplified forms, and the lack of balance in detail will be fixed with a stripe down the pants.