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Originally Posted by Evil Bastard
Reading this thread it quickly became apparent that it was the home of the bluntly gay
I will leave you queer cunts to it
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Who is reading this thread? What became quickly apparent? "Bluntly" is an adverb, but you used "gay" as an adjective. Also your sentence is lacking a closing punctuation and a tasteful comma after "thread." None the less check out the allirteration up in that last line, it's off the hook.