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Originally Posted by davinxtk
It's good. People should read it.
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your opinion doesn't count davin, remember? you're too stuck up to have a nice thought.
james? i'm reading it now. it's what i've decided to do with the first half of my work day. read and critique your work. lucky you.
EDIT: RESPONSE POSTED IN THE THREAD THAT CONTAINS THE REWRITTEN VERSION.