[Sethomas]

Just a few notes on your French:

I'd work on softening your n's (dans is like "DOn", for example) and shorten your vowels. There were a lot of cases where I couldn't tell if you were giving -er verbs Spanish-type pronunciation or if you were speaking the infinitive. I got the impression that you were reading off the monitor verbatim, when really you should just be reading an outline of the general ideas you want to express and maybe include vocabulary you have a hard time remembering. You might stumble more, but it'll sound more natural and probably flow better as a whole.