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Originally Posted by 90's Child
But enough about that. I am goign to start editing my story now. And hooboy, it needs a lot of editing.
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I don't agree with editing it. The Jap in me wants to hit you with a bamboo cane.
YOU KNOW THE STORY! REWRITE IT! PRACTICE!
The fluff and stuff helped support the weak pillars. Tear it down and start a new foundation that is free from the virus that spread throughout the paragraphs.