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Originally Posted by Tadao
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Nevermind, the idiot in the next quote just ruined the whole thing again because she can't write for shit.
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Originally Posted by ZeldaQueen
"Like hell I am!" he roared. "Why should I talk to any of you?" He turned to the man to his left. "You're Arnold Schwartzenager. And you," he said to the child on his right "are the weird kid from The Omen." He got a better look at the others. "OH MY GOD!" he screamed, realizing that they were all leading politicians from the past nine years. Sarah Palin turned to him.
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When people want to be a part of something and have no talent they try to hard to be funny. Trying to hard is part of what you are going through. The exercise I stated before is set up to train you to not try and let the story flow.
What is the most important part of writing? The story.
Really is a shame though, it would have been a perfect exercise for you. Writing a paragraph every once in a while in which you have to consider the previus people and the future writers. But if you write in there it would only be trash.