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Join Date: Feb 2003
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Old Mar 22nd, 2003, 11:29 AM       
Kev,

Kind of liked the way you "killed two birds with one stone" here but the ending was kind of anti-climatic. Couldn't you have had a security guard wrestle him to the ground and cuff him while a co-Mocker gathered his personal effects? Or better yet, Ronnie return later with a shotgun but the SWAT team anticipates him and MACEs the hell out of him ... with no shots fired ... Ronnie on the ground ... blindly sprawling on the floor ... with snot coming from his nose? On second thought, why tamper with brilliance?! That was funny as hell as it was.
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