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Old Jan 24th, 2006, 10:10 AM       
I have no idea why or if you'd lie about English being your native language.

HOWEVER

"DNC is for the more moderate amongst liberals, and thus to me is not an accurate portrayal of all liberals."

THAT does not read like a setence written by someone who's natiove labguage is English. The word 'amongst' has no place in their, 'and thus to me' is rendered 'I think' or if you really want to be high and mighty 'in my opinion', the DNC is an organization which means it can't be a portrayal, etc. etc. etc.

1.) You write very badly.

2.) You don't seem even slightly aware of it.

3.) Your tone suggests you think you are expressing yourself well.

4.) Your posts suggest content, but the writing obscures it in ways that could not possibly be your intent.

There are three things which can lead to a voice like yours.

1.) Second language. You read like directions in English written by someone native to Japan.

2.) Brain dysfunction. Either from birth or trauma.

3.) Overreaching combined with mimicry.

If you can think of another explanation, please elaborate. Until then, I'm going with 1 or 2 out opf charity, as in both scenarios it would not be your fault.
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