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Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Up.
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Apr 10th, 2003, 01:40 AM
It's good. It's well written, but it lacks details. It seems like you need to expand on this horrible force they unleashed with their magic-doing. Also, this business with the Knight of Felis... and the last battle of the Nefas Bellum... where? why? who is fighting?
Also, it may just be something that's on my mind becuase it's fantasy, but all of this business about men being greedy, and this second darkness hoo-plah...
Can someone tell me where I've heard all of this beFrodo?
I mean... before. Right. That's what I mean.
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(1:02:34 AM): and i think i may have gone a little too far and let her know that i actually do hate her, on some level, just because she's female
(1:03:33 AM): and now she's being all kinds of sensitive about it
(1:03:53 AM): i hate women
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