[James]

Well, perhaps I should explain just a little more.

This is supposed to be written in a simple and quick style. It's just a simple legend, which ends up containing a lot of backstory for the actual novel I'll be writing. This, along with a number of other pieces, will make up the world that leads into the actual story, and then some.

So it's not exactly geared towards children in real life, but is considered a "campfire story" if you will in the story. So I'm glad it comes off as being an easy-to-follow tale.

As for the Parenthesis, no prob. I just put it in here as a "just in case." Nefas Bellum is just a very crude translation from English to Latin. I may change it in the end.