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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Black Books
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Jan 19th, 2008, 11:38 AM
I'm definitely going to try to rework it, just not tonight per se.
So--make the paragraphs shorter by cutting out most of the extraneous descriptions, yeah? Anything else?
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I'm about to stop playing "Who Should I Kill First" in my head, and go with what feels natural.
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