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Old May 3rd, 2009, 11:06 PM       
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Originally Posted by Kitsa View Post
The problem with florid and overblown is this.
Exactly. Just say what you need to say.

If you have more to add in later, you can pull an Orson Scott Card and make multiple versions of the book ala Ender's Game.
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