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Old Oct 10th, 2010, 10:23 AM       
Originally Posted by Ozzie View Post
Not to mention "it's" means "it is" whereas "its" is possessive. Caught that at least twice in the opening sentence. And "try's" should be "tries"
Also, "looses" is used in place of "loses" in the first sentence.

That was very funny. Well done.
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