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Old Feb 12th, 2003, 04:18 PM       
Hey Ninjavenom. Since the last time you posted art, you've improved lots. Your anatomical understanding is pretty much solid, although Jason's head is bigger than it should be. A normal head should be about 1/6.5 of total height (not exactly certain). Yours is about 1/5 eyeballing it. Besides that, the arms are about right in length, although the right (our POV) one is longer than the other.

The pencil texture on the overalls is good. But you must select a lightsource, and shade accordingly. Right now, there's no highlighting/shading on the pic that I can see. I suggest an overhead lightsource for starting out.

The hatchet is cool.
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