[ScruU2wice]

that little bulge thing by her crotch is kinda weird at first to me, because it makes it look like shes got a big gut. and the little line by the left knee kinda seems outta place.

I like the ribbon thing though because it expresses tension and lack of tension really well, especially the ones by the head. and the shading is really good.

It's really good, I'd like to see some other stuff but i'm too lazy to go through your site.