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Old Nov 18th, 2004, 09:05 PM        write a song with us!
i'm helping my friend write lyrics to a song he's already mostly recorded all the music to. he's got a studio in his basement with a 24-channel board. very nice.

so the song is called "i want more." we recorded the chorus monday; five of us saying/singing "i want more" over and over.

it's three verses of four sets of rhyming words, basically. each set has at least three rhyming words. the first two lines of each set start with "i want" and end with a noun; the last line of each set should be a longer sentence. (i know i'm probably sucking at explaining this.)

we've come up with four sets of rhymes, which would make up a verse, but the order may change. and we're looking for comical phrases, especially, though "comical" is relative, of course. but serious ones would be cool, too.

and if you come up with something we record, you can get some credit in the liner credits of his cd!


here's what we've got:

i want more cash.
i want more flash.
i want more stuff to fill my stash.

i want more joy.
i want more toys.
stuff made just for us big boys.

i want more sun.
i want more fun.
i want more time when my work is done.

i want more cars.
i want more bars.
i want more skill to play my guitar.


yes?
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Old Nov 18th, 2004, 09:24 PM       
I would like and not want more cash
I would like and not want want more flash in my pan.
i would like more stuff to fill my stash and still not seem so crass.



i would like more joy for the ones I love
i would like more toys for my kids and not just for
men who want to be boys.

I would like to feel the sun
i would like my life to be more fun
i would like feel complete when my work is done.

I would like a cool car
I would like to feel like a star.
And last but not least I would like to be great at playing my guitar.





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Old Nov 19th, 2004, 12:46 AM       
i want more hugs
i want more slugs
just kidding slugs are gross!

you dont have to use that one i like it even if it doesnt all rhyme!

heres some serious comedy lyrics i hope theyre okay im still in college so they might be better in four years promise

i want more youth
i want more vermouth
i want more reprehensible truth

thats for the goth in the family dont we all have one

i want more pokemon
i want more pokemon
i want more gotta catch em all

just kiddin youll get sued!!!

i want more disco balls
i want more telephone calls
i want more suicides from niagra falls

i might add more later ok!
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Old Nov 19th, 2004, 02:40 PM       
fartin: i don't get your not getting it. thanks. try again.

mradventure: yay. i like the one with vermouth ('cause we all know how goth i am!) and the suicides from niagra falls. very inventive, as usual!

my friend byke will be selecting the rhymes; it's his studio and song, after all. and he said one or more lucky contestants may be eligible for a free cd! a full-length cd including the song that credits YOU as a lyrics collaborator! what more could anyone ask for?
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Old Nov 19th, 2004, 02:55 PM       
My friend Byke he looks like a Dyyyyyyyyyyyyke
and she smells really baaaaaaaaaaaad
I got a new tryke and I'm gonna feel allryte
after toniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiyt e. OH YEAH ROCK IT!!!

*Speed rift* *Lots of Wailing*

I want more Jugs
I wish they still made Mugs
the kind that hold beer
make me laugh like a QUEEEEEEEEEEEEER!!!

OH YEAH ROCK IT!!!!
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Old Nov 19th, 2004, 03:05 PM       
i miss the good old dgo days, snatcheroooooo.
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Old Nov 19th, 2004, 03:14 PM       
I just want to bail
From this popcorn trail
Tell the hunchback pope, "Save me a seat in Hell!"

I want a cure for the mange
Rip the riff from LeGrange
Stretch my neck out straight for the scent of some strange

I want a time machine
I want a steak cut lean
I want to bitch slap that silly ass Mr Clean

I want tall dark lady
I want to have a drink with Grady
I want to line up a show and rock out for Sadie

I want some airplay
I don't want to stay
I want to drive a steak through the heart of ClearChannel, mmm-kay

I want food stamps
I want a rag that's damp
So I can wash my dirty ass

All the live long day
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Old Nov 19th, 2004, 03:48 PM       
Beuford Brown is a unique species
'cause he likes to eat his own feces
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Old Nov 20th, 2004, 06:29 PM       
lol @ slavemason.

Quote:
I want to line up a show and rock out for Sadie
sounds cool. psst: i got fired from my band last week. :O

fs: i'm down with the feces/species rhyme, but byke won't even watch csi 'cause it's too GORY.
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Old Nov 20th, 2004, 06:32 PM       
I want to carve your face
I want to flay your skin
I had emotional issues growing up
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Old Nov 21st, 2004, 11:31 AM       
aw, helm, you used one of my most favoritist words. but i think you'd best change the tense of that last line.
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Old Nov 21st, 2004, 11:56 AM       
I'm all grown up, bitch. Don't make me post a description of how I intent to mutilate you with a straight razor.
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Old Nov 21st, 2004, 02:19 PM       
it's ok, my lyrics were 90% written by Bobo anyway.

I want more things
I want more rings(?) (or blings?)
I want to live a life of kings

I want more time
(left empty on purpose)
It's getting hard to make this rhyme


I want more breasts
They are the bests
My plastic surgeon does the rests
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Old Nov 23rd, 2004, 01:20 PM       
i need to go back over and force byke to read these, i suppose. and helm: please do, bitch.
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Old Nov 23rd, 2004, 09:43 PM       
Sorry I'm late guys! A serious one for ya, sadie:

I want more divinity
I want more than what I see
I want endlessly.
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Old Nov 25th, 2004, 06:12 PM       
I want more lubes
I want more n00bs
I want a big black guy to see me in the nude

I want a kiss
I want a miss
I want her to abuse my every orifice

I want more snacks
I want more tracks
I want more huge transvestite racks

I want more perches
I want more searches
I want more fundamental catholic churches
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Old Nov 27th, 2004, 01:25 PM       
luchatein: i like that one. and mr. fugo: call jack black immediately.
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Old Nov 27th, 2004, 02:44 PM       
YES
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Old Dec 4th, 2004, 10:37 PM       
2 meet Big Daddy Kayne
To Release the insaine
Just Like The Scarecrow I want to get A Brain
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