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Old Jun 5th, 2004, 12:13 AM        Time for a new scribbled chick
What do you think? I'm not very good with guns.

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Old Jun 5th, 2004, 04:45 AM       
Hehe, good. Really good. Keep it up.
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Old Jun 5th, 2004, 05:09 AM       
Please, I know you had to name her and everything, but 40% of that picture is empty and needlessly expands its size. This is a message board after all, and though you aren't required to, it'd be kind to make it a little more "browser firendly."

But to my award-winning commentary; the drawing is very rad and everything, along with that dynamic pose, reeow (tilted shoe <3). Yeah, the gun looks as if it is trapped in a dimensional warp where part of it is seen in a 2 dimesnional world where guns grant wishes instead of blowing off body parts, but I am no good with firearms either, so go figure. But you did make her very cute, and the lovable sexy cute at that, so nobody pays attention to the gun unless they are retarded. Its cartoony without being tinytoons; so you get a gold star.
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Old Jun 5th, 2004, 05:54 AM       
Thats really cool.
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Old Jun 5th, 2004, 01:38 PM       
It's neat, but it must be had to move her legs in that skirt.
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Old Jun 5th, 2004, 02:57 PM       
Yeah What the eff guns aren't as easy to draw, as everyone makes them out to be, and it screwed up like my entire art final

You're really good with expressing tensions in parts like the hair and the various ropes going across the body. Theres this one little line of white on the bottom of the skirt that confuses me, but i'm really bad at light source stuff. And you captured a very awesome smug expression on her face...

I haven't really gotten a chance to look through your site but, do you make any drawings in warmer colors?
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Old Jun 6th, 2004, 10:05 PM       
yeah, ScruU, I do too many other pics in warm colors. I have a version of this one in browns, but blues suited it better.
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Old Jun 7th, 2004, 12:07 AM       
I like it. I find the big zippers and boots distracting from the nice job you did on the face and upper torso...just my opinion.
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Old Jun 7th, 2004, 03:37 AM       
Definitely your best piece.

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Old Jun 7th, 2004, 09:53 AM       
Very good. Don't see any problems with the gun, really. The facial expression is very well done and the colouring, although rough, works just fine. Might be interested in varying the width of your outlines a bit, though.
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Old Jun 16th, 2004, 01:50 AM       
Looks really good! Though the gun does look a little wierd compared to the rest of the picture.
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Old Jun 17th, 2004, 06:17 PM       
-right hand looks weird, fingers look really cramped and the tension of the dress suggests it would be hard to fit a hand in there. I'm not sure if its a pocket too :P It doesn't seem deep enough

-Gun looks weird because you made it all 3-d, but not the area around the trigger. That part ( where the finger normally fits into) is only in 2-d. You could try make the contrasts of light/shadows higher on the gun too, so it would see more 3-d and less just shiny, and putting the finger on the trigger would probably work nicely too

-tilted foot looks weird :P Kinda looks unbalanced, but that might be because I can't see the whole picture all at once

-love the facial expression.

I like it : )
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