Mar 13th, 2004, 04:35 AM
I may suck at drawing, I'm well aware of that, but that doesn't mean I don't know anatomy. All we're trying to do is help the artist, although I don't see Supa's point with this because apparently the artist isn't here.
Supa's right. He should have ribs, as well as internal organs. There's colour, so I guess the artist was going for some kind of noir-ish picture, leaving everything else white. But, the only thing that does is muddle up the diffirences between textures. That line near his neck, is it a shirt, or is it where his mask ends. You only see one line of his mask in the face, and it doesn't even connect to anything. Is his whole face covered? If so, how come the stubble? Is he naked save for a shirt/mask or a belt and boots? And glves too?
We're just trying to help. If we were to be doing it like "Yeah, that's good, only there's just a tad bit wrong with the way that his body's bent, if you don't mind me saying so." They'd go "Yeah, but it's just small, right? So it doesn't really matter that much."
Pussyfooting around the big problems will not help solve them. I take critiques on the Penny Arcade (let the laughter commence) forums' Artist's Corner. There kind of crits you find there are similar to those Supa and I gave, and the people who've recieved them there have improved astronomically. I'm just trying to get better, as any artist should.
But yeah, I shouldn't have started this whole thing seing as the artist isn't around.
Trigger, if you like it, great, awesome. Good. Keep it up and shit.
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