is it too early?
yeah it probably is. the progression of these images is terrifying though... it's like putting on too much icing on a cake and solving that with more pizza sauce... or something.
all you had to do was not use mspaint for that new design, thin up the lines..., i dunno, know what you're doing and have some standards?
i *think* i know what you're going for, and my advice for that kind of thing is look at www.randomsummer.com
and see how they do this.
it's free to sign-up and i dont really know why they make you do that as they dont even send you emails when important stuff comes up, but if you look at around page 5 or so you'll see what a little dedication can do to improve things...