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Old Aug 19th, 2005, 11:07 AM        My attempt at a 24-hour comic.
Here's my attempt to make a 24-hour comic. I did it yesterday. It was certainly interesting, but I don't think I'll do that again very soon.

And yeah, it's the same premise as the first comic I tried to make, so I may have bent the rules of a 24-hour comic a little, but oh well.



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Old Aug 19th, 2005, 11:17 AM       
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Old Aug 19th, 2005, 11:28 AM       
i don't know what the term "24-hour comic" means, but that is trippy.
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Old Aug 19th, 2005, 11:41 AM       
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Old Aug 19th, 2005, 12:06 PM       
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i don't know what the term "24-hour comic" means, but that is trippy.
It means that you sit down and attempt to draw a 24-page comic in 24 hours. Everything has to be done in that time. Story and art.
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Old Aug 19th, 2005, 04:48 PM       
i liked it :<
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Old Aug 19th, 2005, 04:53 PM       
I love the heart-ripping :O
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Old Aug 19th, 2005, 05:11 PM       
I showed that page to an AIM buddy of mine and he was all "Man, that was totally Black Metal."
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Old Aug 20th, 2005, 01:31 AM       
Good stuff, I liked the robot.
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Old Aug 20th, 2005, 01:45 AM       
I'd like to try that, if I wasn't too retarded to make even panels. I should probably get one of those L-shaped ruler things(square?).
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Old Aug 22nd, 2005, 12:58 AM       
wow, that is excellent! ;D

You really developed your art style by leaps and bounds ;O

I'm super impressed ;D

Great work, Spectre ;>
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Old Aug 22nd, 2005, 07:38 AM       
Thanks guys, I'm blushing now.
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Old Aug 22nd, 2005, 06:48 PM       
Geez, I loved it. I was rolling.

"Why is my evil twin an eskimo?"

"WHY IS MINE GAY?!"

Priceless.

So...did you actually finish it? And if so, where are the rest of the pages?
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Old Aug 22nd, 2005, 06:55 PM       
If I'd finished it, I would have posted all of the pages.

But I didn't finish it because after I held my pencil for hours on end, I developed a dent in my middle finger which was making it painful to keep drawing.

It's better now, though.
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Old Aug 22nd, 2005, 07:56 PM       
It's pretty ok. Your speech bubbles are impossible though. And what about inking? Go by the 'if you haven't finished in time... keep going' variation of the rule and ink your stuff. Otherwise they don't look like comics. Get a good brush and do one-line inking, will be good practise.
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Old Aug 23rd, 2005, 02:00 AM       
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i enjoyed it. dorky as hell, but some of their facial expressions were dead on. especially the both of them in "ooh, spooky"

well done
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Old Aug 23rd, 2005, 02:22 AM       
i like the minotaur design

also, does the art remind anyone else of the clerks cartoon?
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Old Aug 23rd, 2005, 02:36 AM       
If your going to ink it Spectre X, then you should fix the last panel on the seventh page. Make the experation date on the can easier to read and more visible, I completely missed the joke until they were at the hospital.
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Old Oct 27th, 2005, 08:03 AM       
the squid was eating a brontosaurus (sp?)

hahaha, nice work man
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Old Oct 27th, 2005, 12:28 PM       
I did that to illustrate its age. It's like a time-jump, man.

I like that panel.
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Old Oct 27th, 2005, 10:10 PM       
The drawing is awesome. I try to learn how to draw nicely and i completely suck :/
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