prayer to god

[SatnsAngel]

I dont know what to do.
I tried and tried to fix this mess,
thinking i can do this without you.
God, I lost my wings a long time ago
when i stopped believing in you.
But now I need you more then ever
to shine your precious light into my empy soul,
Because I know without it,
I wouldnt be able to live another day,
Living lost in the shadows
Instead of living lost with you.
By: ~Jessica (SatnsAngel)

[Ninjavenom]

Dear God
Please Make it end
Bless me with a Tommy Gun
Or a .45
I just want everyone to stop
all the madness makes me feel bad
And the darkness consumes me

[Jeanette X]

If you don't believe in God, why are you addressing God in the poem? I'm sorry but I just don't get it.

[UnDeath]

I think by God, he/she/it means "ANYONE WHO'LL PAY ATTENTION"
why else would someone write bad poetry and post it on a message board?
Its too damn whiny and pathetic to be taken seroiusly. Let alone it shows how weak and pathetic it wants to look, which is another attention whore technique. So whatever. Just end it, if you want to see "God" again.
silly whiny goths.

[Jeanette X]

Silly Undeath. This is why it is in the Whiny Goths forum. Its the proper place for it, duh!

[UnDeath]

yeah, I guess I was trying to "fit in" and be all angsty. Oh well. I spilled Pepsi on my keyboard and the H key, the space key, and the K key are all gummed up, so no more of this post for me.




Starting now.
PS- Jeanette, BEWARE EVER SAYING ANYTHING THAT WOULD MAKE ME THINK THAT YOU ARE CRITICISING ME!!! I'LL MODEL SOME CLOTHES AND UES MY AWESOME ENGLSH SKILLS AND THEN BLOW YOU AND UR CAR UP 3W89534573405873458 TIMES LOL. YES THATS A W IN THE NUMBER CUZ IM NOW GOTH AND AM THUS AGAINST THE NORM OF EVERYTHING INCLUDING NUMBERS AND WHAT GENDER WEARS MORE EYESHADOW.


k, im done