i so wish i knew you when i decided to get a fairy tattooed on my back.
anyways, the elongation of her limbs works, because as you said, she's not human. i like the use of light. it's definitely more dramatic in the non-colored version, but the color helps to define that it is light.
when i first saw this, i thought that she was emerging from a waterfall and holding back the water. now that i know what you were trying to acheive it looks to me that she's pushing the light back.
i'm not sure if that makes sense.
the only thing that bothers me a bit is the neck bulge (for lack of a better description).
porn is just babies as work-in-progress