write a song with us!

[sadie]

i'm helping my friend write lyrics to a song he's already mostly recorded all the music to. he's got a studio in his basement with a 24-channel board. very nice.

so the song is called "i want more." we recorded the chorus monday; five of us saying/singing "i want more" over and over.

it's three verses of four sets of rhyming words, basically. each set has at least three rhyming words. the first two lines of each set start with "i want" and end with a noun; the last line of each set should be a longer sentence. (i know i'm probably sucking at explaining this.)

we've come up with four sets of rhymes, which would make up a verse, but the order may change. and we're looking for comical phrases, especially, though "comical" is relative, of course. but serious ones would be cool, too.

and if you come up with something we record, you can get some credit in the liner credits of his cd!


here's what we've got:

i want more cash.
i want more flash.
i want more stuff to fill my stash.

i want more joy.
i want more toys.
stuff made just for us big boys.

i want more sun.
i want more fun.
i want more time when my work is done.

i want more cars.
i want more bars.
i want more skill to play my guitar.


yes?