Okay, only tell this
story at night. You'll see why in a moment. Also, it's good to have
all the lights out and tell the story with a flashlight under your
chin for a spooky effect. NOTE: Make sure the flashlight is on, or
no one will see you, which is kind of spooky but not as effective
for live storytelling. It's okay if you recorded the story,
cause holding a flashlight under a tape recorder's chin isn't very
spooky after about the first thirty seconds.
I like to have a nice glass of wine before I tell this story. You
don't have to, but you should try it because it really loosens you
up for storytelling. Ready? Okay, here we go.
children. I want to tell you a terrifying, true cautionary Halloween
story that I know is true because it was told to me by someone I
know. It was on a dark and creepy night in October just like this
one." (This is why you need to be telling the story at night,
because if you are telling it during the day you have already
screwed it up and ruined your credibility with the kids who will be
more horrified if they believe this story is true. I should also
note that when telling this dark tale of horror, you should not read
aloud anything in parenthesis. If you are reading this sentence
aloud right now, you need to start over.) (Okay, start over again,
and this time do not read the sentences in parenthesis.) (You're
reading this sentence aloud, aren't you? What are you a moron?)
"And there were these two teenagers, a boy and a girl (If your
audience is exclusively gay you may change the sexes of the people
in the story appropriately. If any of your audience is transgendered,
you can make the boy a former girl or vice versa. Beyond that, you
are one your own.) in a car, on a date, driving somewhere I guess to
see a movie or something. And they're listening to the radio, right?
Music! But not hip hop or hard rock, because that doesn't set the
mood right. Or maybe they were, I don't know, but anyway an
announcer breaks in to make an announcement that is real important!
Important enough to cut right in on some music! And the announcer
goes 'We interrupt this music for an important announcement! A
lunatic has escaped from an insane asylum right near you! And he's
on the loose and he's real dangerous 'cause he's nuts and he killed
a whole bunch of teenagers one time, which is why he ended up in a
nuthouse for the criminally insane! He should be considered real
dangerous and he has a HOOKHAND!' (Say 'hookhand' real loud and
lurch forward. Did you just read that aloud? God damn it!) This
really happened, it's a totally true story that I heard from my Old
"And the girl goes 'Oh, man, that's creepy, you should take me home'
and the guy is like 'Oh come on, Nancy (The girls name is Nancy) I
was planning on making out with you cause we're teenagers!' and she
goes 'I thought we were going to a movie!' and he goes 'No, that's
just what I told your parents because if I said I wanted to go make
out with you they might not let me.' And she goes 'Well, I do like
to make out.' And the guy goes 'I know, that's what everybody says,
that's why I asked you out, and besides, this is a big area, what
are the chances we will run into an escaped lunatic when there's
only one of them? Also, we are in a car that is moving and he may be
nuts but how fast can he run?' And the girl goes, 'okay, let's park
somewhere and make out, but keep the engine running so if the
lunatic shows up we can make a quick get away.'"
(This is a good place to take a dramatic pause and take a drink on
account of you don't want to get parched. Drambuie is good at this
point in a creepy tale, or some kind of flavored Schnapps.)
"So the guy pulls over in a secluded spot and leaves the engine on.
And he puts his arm around the girl and they start necking." (Do not
get any more specific than this, no matter how tempted you may be.
Once I was telling this tale and kind of got distracted and carried
away and added some details into this part. And some of the parents
of the kids I told the story to got really mad and I had to stop
being a Cub Scout leader. This is back before they required CORI reports.
And if you read this part out loud you should just forget it and
give up because I told you like three times not to, and also these
kids you're talking to now know your CORI report is not everything
it should be.) (CORI stands for Criminal Offense Record Information.)
"And then Jessica goes (I decided her name isn't Nancy, because if I
can't tell sexy details I can at least have a sexier name than
Nancy) 'You know what, Dave (Oh, the boy's name is Dave) I'm too
creeped out by this whole escaped lunatic thing to enjoy this making
out with you.' And Dave tries to get her back into the mood, and when
that doesn't work, asks if she'll just keep going until he's done
being in the mood (again, not too specific here) and Jessica gets
all mad and he says 'Okay, okay!' and he goes to start the car and it
won't start. (Oh, shit. I already said the engine was still running,
didn't I? Okay, go back and don't tell that whole part about keeping
the engine running. No, wait, that won't work because Jessica said
she'd only make out with him if he kept the engine running so she
wouldn't be too scared to make out. Of course she's too scared
anyway, and I think she knew that all along, which means either she
doesn't like Dave that much or she has intimacy issues, which is so
not how the other guys said she would be. Crap. Okay, the engine is
on, tell them the engine is on) And he starts to pull out and the
car stops because it is out of GAS! And Jessica is like 'Quit
fucking around you son of a bitch!' 'cause she's scared and her
white trash gutter mouth really comes out when she's scared and Dave
goes 'What, you think I'd fake running out of gas just to make out
with you? You are so stuck up!' and Jessica goes 'Okay fine' and
Dave goes 'But do you want to make out anyway since we're not going
anywhere?' and she reminds him about the escaped lunatic and he goes
(You are pretty dry again by now, so take a big long pull of
something. I'd go with Jägermeister for the dramatic effect of that
creepy German type stag's head logo.)
"Remember, kids, this story is true and I know that to be the
because a friend by the name of Jim Beam told it to me, and he is a
trusted friend. So Brick (I just realized 'Dave' is not a name that
inspires a lot of confidence, and you want the guy to seem all manly
and shit for the ironic effect later. Trust me. ) So Brick (Is
'Brick' too gay? Like, kind of rough trade? Be honest. No? Okay.) So
Brick goes 'I guess I better go walk and get gas at that gas station
about a mile back on this unlit road we are on.' And Jessica goes
'Oh, you are NOT leaving me alone with an escaped lunatic on the
prowl who has killed teenagers before and has a HOOKHAND!' and Brick
says she should just lock the car and stop being such a girl and she
says 'I am a girl!' and he's like 'you wouldn't know it by me.' and
says 'what's that supposed to mean?' and he's all 'girls like to make
out with me.' and she goes 'maybe they don't.' and he goes 'well
fine!' And she's like 'Well FINE then!' And Brick gets out of the
car and slams the door and storms off into the night thinking about
how first she wouldn't make out with him and now she doesn't even
care if he walks a whole mile in the dark when there's an escaped
lunatic on the prowl with a hookhand and everything and this story
is true, remember, I can vouch for that on account of it first being
related to me by my pal Johnny Walker who is the one person on this
planet who has never lied to me."
(Your gonna think I'm nuts, but try a swig of Crème De Menthe here.
Seriously. It's a little faggy but it really suits the next part of
the story, which is all about the girl. Seriously. It'll get you
simpatico with her girl fears. Unless you are a girl, which I
totally didn't think of until just now, but is okay, because girls
are fine with Crème de Menthe, and quite frankly so am I. Crème de
Menthe gets a very girly rap which it should not, because it may be
sweet, but it hits like a friggin' hammer to the face.)
"So China (I don't know, the Crème de Menthe has got me thinking her
name is China now, which is like a totally hot name) is at first all
mad and then she looks in the rearview mirror and can't even see
Dave anymore (oh, he's Dave again, cause now that her name is China,
she totally would have made out with a guy named Brick. I mean, come
on, Brick and China? They'd be screwing by now, lunatic or no
lunatic.) And she starts to get scared and regretful about fighting,
but not about not making out, because what kind of sick fuck is up
for necking when a hookhanded teenager murdering lunatic is on the
prowl? I mean, what... does he think his name is 'Brick' or something?"
(Malt Liquor for this next part. Trust me.)
"Okay, where am I? OH! Right! The announcer guy busts in on the music
again and says 'Don't worry, everybody, the escaped Lunatic got
caught! Everything is okay now!' and China is super relieved and she
leans back in the car seat in a way that really stretches her shirt
tight over her boobs (Okay, we are right on the edge of PG-13 here,
so NO FURTHER! And maybe don't say 'Boobs'. Just say, like, chest.)
And out of nowhere (Shout this next part real loud for the shock
effect) BRICK'S DEAD BODY THUMPS DOWN ON THE ROOF AND HIS UPSIDE-DOWN, TOP PART OF HIS BODY IS HANGING RIGHT OVER THE WINDSHIELD AND
HIS THROAT IS SLIT AND HE'S DEAD! DAVE I MEAN!"
"AND CHINA IS LIKE SCREAMING AND SCREAMING AND SHE SLIDES INTO THE
DRIVERS SEAT AND THROWS THE CAR INTO REVERSE AND GUNS IT AND...
she... the car... the car is supposed to be out of gas, isn't it?
Fuck. Uhm... I guess, like, Dave was just lying about the being out
of gas part. That makes sense, right? To get China to make out with
him more since they were stuck with nothing else to do? But if they
weren't really out of gas, why would he walk out into the middle of
the night, when there's an escaped hookhanded lunatic on the loose?
OH! Because he didn't WANT her to know he lied about the whole out
of gas situation! Of course! SO SHE PUTS THE PEDAL DOWN AND THE
CAR... the car... wait. Wait!"
(Bong hit) (Did you actually just say the words 'bong hit' out loud? Fuckin'
"Okay, if she believed the car was out of gas, right? Why try to
drive it? If she panicked would she try? Like, out of desperation?
Maybe. She might. Okay, that's what happened. It sounds okay. This
part should probably have been in parenthesis. I mean, it's not really
part of the story. I am so faced right now. Oh crap!" (I am so faced
right now, right?)
"ANYWAY, SHE TEARS OUT OF THERE and she's driving like a total
madwoman, and Brick's dead body is, like COMPLETELY obscuring her
view, which if you've ever tried to drive with something on the
windshield is like, fucking TERRIFYING! This one time? On the
highway? My hood sprang open, and I'm like going seventy miles an
hour and I cannot see a fuckin' thing! THAT is scary, my friends.
Not some shit about running out of gas with an escaped lunatic on
the prowl with a hookhand. REAL LIFE is scary. Like you marry
someone? And you think they're a China? But really they aren't even
a Jessica, they're more like a Nancy and you start wondering if they
changed, or if they were ever even a China at all, and what the hell
are you supposed to do now, GO THROUGH LIFE WITH A NANCY?! THAT was
not the PLAN! That was never the plan. But that's life, kids.
THAT... is fuckin' life. Trick or treat, right? Trick or fuckin'
(You're about to scream THE NEXT PART, so just something light here,
like a Wine Cooler or Zima. OH! TWISTED TEA! I love that shit! NO!
NO! A CHINESE RESTAURANT DRINK! Like, a Mai Tai or a Fog Cutter.
What's that one where the cup is shaped like a coconut? That one.)
"AND BRICK'S BODY SLIDES OFF THE WIND SHIELD AND SHE RUNS IT OVER AND
THE CAR GOES UP AND DOWN LIKE A DAMN LOWRIDER BUT FROM RUNNING OVER
A DEAD BODY AS OPPOSED TO HYDRAULIC LIFTS! AND THE RADIO COMES ON
AND GOES 'THE LUNATIC IS STILL ON THE LOOSE, THE GUY THEY CAUGHT WAS
JUST SOME OTHER GUY WITH A HOOKHAND!' AAAAAAAAAAGH!
And she gets to the gas station right? And she pulls in 'cause it's
well lit and there's an attendant there, and she stops the car and
gets out and she's totally hysterical! And this is a true story told
to me by a very trustworthy cousin of mine named Southern Comfort!
And the attendant goes 'What's wrong, what's wrong?' and she tries
to tell him but she's too hysterical and as he leads her away we
notice hanging from the drivers side door handle is a HOOKHAND!
'Cause the lunatic had his hookhand on the door and was about to get
China when she peeled out and it TORE OFF HIS HOOK HAND!!
Okay, yes, the car was locked, you're right, but so what? It's
totally creepy right? To have the Hookhand hanging there? It so is.
And wait, wait. You think we're done, right, but in the classic
horror tradition, we are not! As the attendant leads China off he
puts his arm around her to comfort her and OH MY CHRIST, HE'S GOT A
Well, so what if it doesn't make sense? You think the horror is over
but it isn't over, that's CLASSIC HORROR! Okay, okay fine, after you
see the attendant's hookhand you hear the announcer come on the
radio again and go 'Another Lunatic has just escaped and this one
also has a hookhand!'"
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN FAR FETCHED!? It's a true damn story! Haven't you
ever heard 'truth is stranger than fiction'? You know what? Get the
hell out of my house. That's the last time I EVER tell you kids a
story. And DO NOT come back here on Halloween. You 'Trick or Treat'
my house, I will punch your damn lights out. Seriously. I don't even
Oh, listen, listen, if your going by the package store, will you
stop in and get me whatever the highest proof thing this ten bucks
will buy? 'Cause they won't sell me shit anymore. It'll be okay,
tell 'em it's for your mom, I'll write you a note."
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born 1936, Long Beach California, is a freak. No matter what role he's
playing (and you've seen him in everything from "Cool Hand Luke" to
"Star Trek: Insurrection" and "The Matrix" movies). No matter how hard
he may try to low key it or play it straight, his freak flag is
flying. In fact, the calmer he is, the creepier he gets. Maybe it's
those damn eyebrows that arch up and flare out like he's permanently
pissed off or maybe not human. Never did he scare the crapola out of
me more than when he played Brother Mathias, the Anchorman turned
Charismatic cult leadin', Charlton Heston Killin' post apocalyptic
zombie, Brother Mathias in my absolute favorite horror flick, "The
Omega Man". Sure, it's dated, sure every Black person in it has a 'Fro
you could cut topiary out of, but for my money, NOTHING is
creepier than Zerbe saying, "Show him the marks, my brothers. Show him
the pretty, pretty marks." And then they all take off their sunglasses
and their pupils are like REALLY, REALLY PALE BLUE!!! ALMOST
WHITE!! Okay, maybe Zerbe was scarier as the mad scientist in
"Kiss Meets the Phantom of the Park". Maybe.
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