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| Oct 3rd, 2003 05:07 AM | ||
| sadie |
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| Sep 4th, 2003 01:01 PM | ||
| Big McLargehuge |
Thank you 
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| Sep 4th, 2003 12:25 PM | ||
| Protoclown |
Quote:
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| Sep 4th, 2003 11:25 AM | ||
| kellychaos |
Re: Beacause I hate you all. Quote:
Even with e.e. cummings there's a continuity of form and style. :/ |
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| Sep 4th, 2003 10:16 AM | ||
| sadie | i don't think it's so much the poem is made up of ordinary sentences that makes it seem un-poem-like. it's more that there are no details. poetry is about specifics. plus, the word preclude fits not within the tone of the rest of the piece. | |
| Sep 4th, 2003 01:46 AM | ||
| Big McLargehuge |
I am offended that you said "no offense dude". 
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| Sep 3rd, 2003 12:36 PM | ||
| Protoclown |
You should have seen it before the board took away all my funky spacing. Free verse is pretty much the only thing I write in, aside from rare moments of insanity where I try something else. No offense dude, but it just doesn't sound very poetic to me. |
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| Sep 2nd, 2003 12:56 PM | ||
| Big McLargehuge |
Ever heard of free verse ASSHOLE.  Your satire looks like it was written by e. e. cummings
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| Sep 2nd, 2003 12:23 PM | ||
| Protoclown |
Dude, that's not a poem rather it is a bunch of normal s e n t e n ces put together in faggy poem style. |
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| Sep 2nd, 2003 04:47 AM | ||
| executioneer |
IT DOESN'T EVEN RHYME D- -willie |
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| Sep 2nd, 2003 02:32 AM | ||
| Big McLargehuge | I had to download that song to know what an asshole you are. | |
| Sep 2nd, 2003 02:06 AM | ||
| Professor Cool |
Sorry, no offense intended, but i could hear morrisey singing that. Once again, I'm sorry...I'M SO SORRY I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I'M SOOO SORRY! |
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| Sep 2nd, 2003 01:59 AM | ||
| Big McLargehuge |
Beacause I hate you all. I wrote this [center:7a1342d087]Heaven on earth never precluded Hell within. And you bring Hell to me By not being mine I should be more fair With judgment And take part of the blame. Because I should be more open Or at least at times Speak to you. But I rather be left alone So I can write about how Your face keeps me up at night. And how thinking of you Reminds me of The value of life But you wouldn’t believe that And that’s why I love a face I cannot name[/center:7a1342d087] I didn't write this because i hate you. I wrote because i forgot a girls name. I think it starts with a p or s |
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