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| Jun 6th, 2004 05:03 AM | |
| MrAdventure |
 @ irony
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| Jun 6th, 2004 01:10 AM | |
| acoustic_sr71 | There were misspellings. Edwin looked up, Edwin sat up, Edwin stared at the wall, Edwin wants to be called He for a change. PROOFREAD!!! |
| Oct 17th, 2003 09:11 PM | |
| Mike P |
I shall remember that in the future... It might have been in the odd way I wrote it, as well. I already wrote the whole thing, but thought I could do better, so went about revising it. However, I copy-pasted bits I thought were already good out of the first version into the newer version. Stupid lazy me. |
| Oct 17th, 2003 06:35 PM | |
| Drew Katsikas | I'm not done, but you consitently switch tenses. From he did, to he is doing, within the same story is confusing and poor writing. |
| Oct 17th, 2003 06:13 PM | |
| Mike P |
Does this suck? http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1298434 Could I get some feedback on this please? Personally, I think it sucks, but an supposedly, I'm my own worst critic. |
