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Aug 11th, 2003 06:36 PM
OperationScuzBucket If you want a real critique of your poetry, go here:

http://www.deviantart.com/

It's an art site...I post my songs there. [/url]
May 30th, 2003 08:46 PM
NIGhtMAre <---- only way out goth!
May 29th, 2003 02:19 PM
Bennett yeah, goth, you really need to deal with the responsibilities of having a fake girlfriend, and make sure that you take care of and provide for both her and your imaginary baby. It's going to be really hard to balance all of this with your responsibilities as a "colledge" professor, when you become one in a few months, and all of that compounded with the modelling job. You're really going to need to get your shit together.
May 29th, 2003 02:14 PM
Jeanette X
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Originally Posted by GothNAPrepsBody
We didn't want to be bothered by other people during that time.
You mean you decided that it was just too hard to deal with at the time. Well tough shit kid. Learn to stand up for her even when it is hard, otherwise you aren't going to make a terrible good husband.
May 29th, 2003 07:06 AM
GothNAPrepsBody
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Originally Posted by Jeanette X
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Originally Posted by GothNAPrepsBody

Ive already answered this, yeah we see each other and yes people know now who the baby belongs to. At the time we had exams and didn't want questions but now were open.
Then why do you still refer to her as your ex-girlfriend and not your fiance? And why weren't you open when had exams? What fucking difference does it make?

We didn't want to be bothered by other people during that time.
May 28th, 2003 12:01 PM
Jeanette X
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Originally Posted by GothNAPrepsBody

Ive already answered this, yeah we see each other and yes people know now who the baby belongs to. At the time we had exams and didn't want questions but now were open.
Then why do you still refer to her as your ex-girlfriend and not your fiance? And why weren't you open when had exams? What fucking difference does it make?
May 28th, 2003 09:57 AM
GothNAPrepsBody Yes If I pay for the baby and care about it and I make one bad choice... anyways a person can't change their past so why bother them about it I've really changed since I have a daughter to support like it or not thats who I am deal with you fuckers satn thanks for the support And Mariz if you happen to read this thank you
May 28th, 2003 08:00 AM
SatnsAngel if thats true... then good for you as long as you live up to responsibilities
May 28th, 2003 07:00 AM
GothNAPrepsBody
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Originally Posted by Jeanette X
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Originally Posted by GothNAPrepsBody
Satn thats good I've got a few heres one of mine;

Quietly I went through,
Lookin for a gift for you,
But not one was in sight,
no candy that sweet, no stone that bright.

Thats when i realized nothins good enough for you,
But here is my heart wich I gladly give to you.


I wrote this and put it with the necklace I gave to my ex-girlfriend.
Oh isn't that sweet? You give her a necklace and sappy poem...yet you do not spend time with her because you are afraid people will find out you are the father of her child. If you really gave a shit about her, you would be with her and openly admit that the baby is yours. What kind of person says "I love you, but I can't be seen with you."? What do you care if people know its your baby? If you truly loved her you wouldn't care what people think.

Ive already answered this, yeah we see each other and yes people know now who the baby belongs to. At the time we had exams and didn't want questions but now were open.
May 27th, 2003 02:47 PM
Bennett "I love you,
You love me,
Going down the honey tree.
We'll go down the honey-tree,
and they'll be lots of bees,
playing,
playing.
but they won't sting me,
because you love me."

excuse me if I didn't quote that exactly, hopefully someone will catch the reference, it's the first thing that came to mind when I read gothnahaircuttwobits poem.
May 27th, 2003 02:13 PM
Jeanette X
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Originally Posted by GothNAPrepsBody
Satn thats good I've got a few heres one of mine;

Quietly I went through,
Lookin for a gift for you,
But not one was in sight,
no candy that sweet, no stone that bright.

Thats when i realized nothins good enough for you,
But here is my heart wich I gladly give to you.


I wrote this and put it with the necklace I gave to my ex-girlfriend.
Oh isn't that sweet? You give her a necklace and sappy poem...yet you do not spend time with her because you are afraid people will find out you are the father of her child. If you really gave a shit about her, you would be with her and openly admit that the baby is yours. What kind of person says "I love you, but I can't be seen with you."? What do you care if people know its your baby? If you truly loved her you wouldn't care what people think.
May 26th, 2003 12:15 PM
GothNAPrepsBody Satn thats good I've got a few heres one of mine;

Quietly I went through,
Lookin for a gift for you,
But not one was in sight,
no candy that sweet, no stone that bright.

Thats when i realized nothins good enough for you,
But here is my heart wich I gladly give to you.


I wrote this and put it with the necklace I gave to my ex-girlfriend.
May 20th, 2003 07:38 AM
SatnsAngel matt shut up
May 19th, 2003 11:15 PM
Cap'n Crunch So sadie, did you find the land of tears yet?
May 19th, 2003 05:12 AM
sadie omg. esuohlim. it's like alice in wonderland when her tears form a tidalwave and burst through the talking-lock door. maybe angel's the carpenter? he was so stupid he lost out on all the curious oysters. no. wait a minute. i know. angel must be the little mouse in the mad hatter's sugar dish: "twinkle, twinkle, little bat. . ."
May 18th, 2003 09:34 PM
SatnsAngel Esuohlim.... stop being such a fuckn fag. if your gonna make fun of me, just make alittle more sense.
May 18th, 2003 03:52 PM
Esuohlim [center:f4ab6382e9]I'M FROM THE LAND OF TEARS
:CRY :CRY :CRY THE TEARS NEVER STOP
TEARS ARE LIKE RAIN IN THE LAND OF TEARS, ONLY THEY'RE TEARS
TEARS FORM FLOODS
A TIDAL WAVE, IF YOU WILL, OF TEARS
SOON THE WHOLE LAND, THE LAND OF TEARS, WILL SINK IN THE FLOOD, WHICH IS A FLOOD OF TEARS
THE POPULATION OF THE LAND OF TEARS WILL DROWN IN THE TEARS THEY CAUSED, WHICH TURNED INTO A FLOOD
A FLOOD OF TEARS
THERE IS A LAND OF TEARS NO MORE
NOW IT'S AN OCEAN OF TEARS
AN OCEAN OF TEARS
AN OCEAN OF TEARS
:cry[/center:f4ab6382e9]
May 18th, 2003 02:55 PM
SatnsAngel fine ill stop my shit with the fuckn poems okay... maybe ill just start critisizing your shit..
May 18th, 2003 11:08 AM
Helm that's a better poem than your first one.
May 18th, 2003 10:34 AM
SatnsAngel am i being mocked
May 18th, 2003 02:15 AM
Esuohlim You must enjoy being made fun of because of your poems. Otherwise, you are just fucking stupid.
May 18th, 2003 02:10 AM
Cap'n Crunch sadie, you don't know where the land of tears is?
May 17th, 2003 11:35 PM
Rongi
May 17th, 2003 11:35 PM
sadie angel, you forgot to include directions to your house. what am i? fucking psychic?
May 17th, 2003 07:58 PM
Rongi Don't take offense by my cold-hearted vision.. I cant escape the dreams of my head
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