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| Mar 18th, 2007 01:56 AM | ||
| Supafly345 |
ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXY and Z, Now that I know my ABC's, Next time you can think with me. |
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| Mar 10th, 2007 11:59 PM | ||
| Terra |
i take issue with the midget for display. otherwise, that was great, farty! |
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| Mar 9th, 2007 07:05 PM | ||
| FartinMowler |
God I hate this site Nobody loves me or if they do I doubt they might Thorns and porn and clubs of unicorns Forlorn and scorn there is not evolution to dismay giant piles of shit and waves of urine and a floating tampons Widgets and gollywogs and a midget for display I'm happy today I'm drinking beer and I'm not gay 
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| Mar 9th, 2007 05:33 PM | ||
| deuce |
Heart Of Glass http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZXdlouMEzA |
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| Mar 9th, 2007 04:43 PM | ||
| Jixby Phillips | I wrote a poem an hour before my creative writing class entitled "OH FUCK I FORGOT TO WRITE A POEM" and I got an A on it | |
| Mar 8th, 2007 11:11 PM | ||
| Terra |
hi cos, baybee!!!! 
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| Mar 6th, 2007 10:07 AM | ||
| Cosmo Electrolux | it had Lenor in the title | |
| Mar 6th, 2007 09:34 AM | ||
| Grislygus | How the hell did I miss this thread | |
| Mar 5th, 2007 10:02 PM | ||
| Jeanette X |
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Once I had a love and it was a gas Soon turned out had a heart of glass Seemed like the real thing, only to find Mucho mistrust, love's gone behind Once I had a love and it was divine Soon found out I was losing my mind It seemed like the real thing but I was so blind Mucho mistrust, love's gone behind In between What I find is pleasing and I'm feeling fine Love is so confusing there's no peace of mind If I fear I'm losing you it's just no good You teasing like you do Dance if you know this song!  |
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| Mar 5th, 2007 09:59 PM | ||
| Jeanette X |
wasting time online I should really go to bed Christ Lenor is dumb |
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| Feb 28th, 2007 01:16 PM | ||
| Womti |
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I would call this poetry. |
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| Feb 28th, 2007 11:38 AM | ||
| Lenor |
That is no haiku! Let's here it gadzooks. The ODE to his HS sweetie. |
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| Feb 28th, 2007 05:14 AM | ||
| GADZOOKS |
Chojin: JAX WINS, CRUELALITY That made me Roseanne Laugh. I never Roseanne laugh. Back in high school I was forced to take a Creative Writing class and a major unit was Poetry. And we had to create a one-sentence poem using a bunch of notes with words on them. Mine was "It takes a fart to break a heart". I made up some bullshit how an ex-girlfriend broke up with me because I passed gas a lot. My teacher called me a cheater and I ended up with a C in the class. THE C IS FOR CHEATER, I GUESS. |
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| Feb 28th, 2007 01:05 AM | ||
| kahljorn |
man i had this awesome poem named Walrii the Third I improvised but i think it got deleted from my computer ;( son of a bitch! I don't think i backed that one up, either. |
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| Feb 28th, 2007 12:58 AM | ||
| kahljorn | i used to write a lot of poetry when i was all into improvisation and pulling intelligent zany seeming things out of my ass. Now i pull intelligent seeming things out of my penis. | |
| Feb 27th, 2007 09:56 PM | ||
| Fathom Zero | No band is better than the Beets, brah. | |
| Feb 27th, 2007 09:49 PM | ||
| liquidstatik |
puttttinn it down for ca$hdown 
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| Feb 27th, 2007 09:44 PM | ||
| noob3 |
yo yo yo noob3 here wants to tell a story about a kid without any wories he was 7 foot tall lookin real clean until a police officer shot him in the spleen he was bleedin on the floor lookin like he was poor wondered why god could let this happen to a man so educated in rappin "lord yo why you keepin me down gotta make all us black ppl frown" now jesus stepped in and he said aint noone keepin u down its all in ur head the black man went to heaven and it was realy nice he said "man these white ppl dont even have lice!" |
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| Feb 27th, 2007 09:39 PM | ||
| Chojin |
Chojin and Lenor's Poetry Thread Lenor: ut oh i just wrote a poem :/ Lenor: wanna see it? Chojin: sup Lenor: i just wrote it like the one minute ago Chojin: i mean yes Lenor: i hate myself today.. the lonliness that i derive, from never giving in... my heart is made of glass, the feelings disapeared.. your only just an image in my imaginary state the needle breaks me down, yet your always on my arm, the feeling never disapeares, yet i cry each and every day. Lenor: what ya think? Chojin: you didn't follow haiku prose at all Lenor: its not a haiku Chojin: i'll say! Lenor: which would explain the format Lenor: honestly, does it suck? need more work? throw it away? Lenor: frame it ? Lenor: what Chojin: it's a little cliche Lenor: its a little cliche ? when I wrote it in 4 seconds? Chojin: especially because you wrote it in 4 saeconds Lenor: do you meen mainstream? Chojin: do you know what cliche means Lenor: yes, but I dont see where it would fit in me just asking you what you thought of a few lines of a poem i wrote in 4 seconds. Chojin: cli·ché /kliˈʃeɪ, klɪ-/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[klee-shey, kli-] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation –noun 1. a trite, stereotyped expression; a sentence or phrase, usually expressing a popular or common thought or idea, that has lost originality, ingenuity, and impact by long overuse, as sadder but wiser, or strong as an ox. 2. (in art, literature, drama, etc.) a trite or hackneyed plot, character development, use of color, musical expression, etc. 3. anything that has become trite or commonplace through overuse. 4. British Printing. a. a stereotype or electrotype plate. b. a reproduction made in a like manner. –adjective 5. trite; hackneyed; stereotyped; clichéd. Lenor: alright Im going to ignore the literary lesson,. Chojin: i'm just saying, the word makes perfect sense where and how i used it Lenor: So your saying what i wrote was completly unorignal. Lenor: unoriginal* Lenor: played out, trainwreck Chojin: i said a little cliche Lenor: well id like to see you come up with a poem that isnt 3 lines with four words per line, that expresses something you were feeling in oh lets say under 10 seconds. Chojin: exasperation at the tiny rage Chojin: one who asks for critique, sorrow untold to those who comply Chojin: the internet is serious business Chojin: *bow* Lenor: not even close. Lenor: the second line is really interesting. Chojin: AT THE BIB OF THE MOUTH OF BABES, THE SOUND AND FURY OF TINY ANGER Chojin: SERIOUS BUSINESS, THE INTERNET HAS BUT ONE ALIGNMENT Chojin: there, you can replace 1 and 3 with that. Lenor: Cruelality has but one face, dangerouse to those who wish to become erased. Chojin: JAX WINS, CRUELALITY Lenor: umm you just interupted me! Lenor: this isnt about SPELLING Chojin: Break it down. Chojin: Degenerate into something, fool. Chojin: I just got tired, Chojin: Of doing what you told me to do. Chojin: But that's the breaks, boy. Chojin: Yea, Chojin: That's the breaks, Chojin: Little man. Lenor: the walls are comin in low, while the water seems to stay up high. Lenor: your wittless undermine , only escapes my presciouse and fragile mind. Chojin: Hurricane Katrina, Neva Forget. Lenor: broken while not yet torn, ive been walking in your shadown , Chojin: Hey yo, Captain Jack. Chojin: Bring me back Chojin: To the railroad track. Lenor: and while the truth comes out sometime, my consiouse keeps me insane. Lenor: im not some random puppet for you to explore, im me, im here, im not you. Chojin: I need more allowance. Chojin: Yo-de-lay-hee. Chojin: I need more allowance. Chojin: Yo-da-lay-hee, hoo Chojin: I need more allowance. Chojin: Yo-da-lay-hee, Chojin: Why? Because I do. Lenor: ha im better then u at something! Chojin: TAKE A BOW! Lenor: ok SHARE YOUR OWN POETRY. |
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