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First Insect Politician
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May 23rd, 2009, 09:20 PM
You seem to have mistakenly put a "don't" and a second "any" in that post!
Have one of 90schild's e-mails to me:
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First off, I have a favor I'd like to request of you. You area person whom I respect as a writer and an artist, so I was wondering if you could take a look at my (currently very much unfinished, without the villaisn even beign introduced) story I was writing. I am a young writer (about age 17), and I want to take up writing as a career, so I ned all the help I can get. Although most people who've commented on it liked it, the majority of the people on the I-Mockery fiorums were... very hateful of it, including one guy who said "YOUR WRITING IS MEDIOCRE, YOUR CHARACTERS ARE UNISPIRED, YOU REUSE WORDS, PEPOLE WANT CHARACTERS DESCRIBED IN THE TEXT, NOT IN A SEPRATE PROFILE, AND YOUR PLOT IS BORING TRIPE THAT HAS BEEN USED A THOUSAND TIMES." So, with that in mind, I need to know how to improve it. So that's why I'm coming to you to ask for your opinion on it. And I know you have plenty of time, unlike other people I've asked, because you're unemployed.
And also, I had an idea for a little trade. You know those Lycanthropes (Althoguh they should be called therianthropes because Lycanthrope only refers to the wolf-based ones) youtsaid you would never draw, buty I had an idea. Why not do a poster for different lycanthropes in exchange for me writing a Mortasheen story for you? BEcause there are some things I was wondering about your conceptions of were-creatures.
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