Some self-written science fiction crap that goes nowhere.

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Colonel James? Major James? Colonel James? Is this a mistake, or is Major James, Colonel James's father?

It's hard to say much about it since it looks kinda thrown together and not (yet) thought through too much. A little oversimplified, with the 'entire formula of everything,' though it might go somewhere with some refining.

Is there any intended humor in it? I'm not saying that to be cruel, but because "DeXxXalisd" is such an obviously meant obscure name (generally accomplished by throwing in letters like X, Q and Y, adding in apostrophes, capital letters in the middle of the word, adding redudant letters - ie 'magick' instead of 'magic'), that the fact that his first name is "Frank" strikes me as kind of funny.