HOT TUPAC

[Jixby Phillips]

This is based on an idea Mr Adventure had and he gave me the go ahead to write it up and here we go!

http://www.geocities.com/jixby_phillips/hottupac.html

ps theres bad spelling and some rude diologue that gets a little rude

[Studio8]

My thoughts:

I hate when black people in scripts say the word "dog" because it never seems placed right. Such is the case here.

Miranda's line about the holiday was decent but Tupac rolling his eyes made all of that really funny.

The east and west side line was suprisingly sort of clever, because those jokes usually never are.

I think there is a typo in the paragraph that describes what Marinda is carrying. But biggie freezing the fish is funny. And saying Got damned black molly is really funny too. I like it.

I hate "not in a gay way."

The water tower scene, unless I missed something, doesn't make any sense. But I hope that's how it was intended, because it was funny.

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Did you ask for someone to do all of this? I dunno. You're kind of funny.

[Jixby Phillips]

yeah i knida hated not in a gay way but i put it in as a practical joke on myself i guess its supposed to be a bad joke byut maybe its TOO bad if you know what i mean and i dont mean it in a gay way lol

thanks studio 8 !l

[Jixby Phillips]

instead of "its a good thing we're already dead!" maybe biggie should say "that was fun can i do that again!"

maybe ic an get BOTH of them in therE??? POSSIBLE??

[liquidstatik]

Yeh, tupac rolling his eyes was the funniest part of it.

[PILLOWFIGHT]

I LOVE "not in a gay way KEEP IT

[Captain Goodtimes]

I knowwhat happened with the blue paint and the water tower, but not the money in the world will let me ruin the secret

[FS]

I got the jokes so I thought this was very funny

But seriously, this is a great idea I wish Jixby had his own show with its own dance group, the Mad Fliez.

[Jixby Phillips]

In the second episode they teach a retarded girl to kiss using a photo of Fabian, and Skeezer takes her out on a date and Miranda accuses him of trying to take advantage of her

[whoreable]

ha i forgot all about that idea mr adventure had, it was fucking awesome.







I love the idea of making it such a mockery of sitcoms. keepup the good work.