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[davyjoneslocker]

anyone have any suggestions as to what i can do with this?


immersed in the frosty waters, the girl's chest and lungs felt as if clenched within an iron fist, and her whole body seemed clothed in ice. unwittingly she allowed herself to drift lifelessly upwards - her face gently breaking the calm surface of the bay - and her tormented lungs took in a shallow, merciful breath. even so, her limbs were reluctant to function, and she began to convulse uncontrollably, flailing and splashing to stay afloat, gripped by the terrifying possibility of sinking back into the murky depths.